I feel like it would have been more believable if Dean and Cas had known each other longer.Other than that and the typos, this is undoubtedly the single greatest fanfic I've ever read. Even though I would love to believe in love-at-first-sight, it is simply not realistic. Kudos to you, whomever you are! This being said, the only reason I didn't give this piece 5 stars is because of the insta-love factor at the beginning. The fact that this author put so much effort into their personalities says a lot for their writing skills. Too many authors make their characters unrealistic in the way they behave. The way the characters reacted to their situations made them seem REAL as opposed to fiction. I only shed a couple tears for The Fault in Our Stars, but this fanfiction made me straight up bawl like a baby for the better part of two hours. Review 2: I have never read anything in my life that has made me feel this heart broken. It proves that fanfiction can make you feel something - this story is a work of art, truly and deeply moving. Experience the thrills and attractions of Los Angeles, California with your very own theme park pass. I sobbed my way through a very large majority of Twist and Shout.This story, to me, proves that fanfiction is a valid form of literature. Review 1: Although it is not the most superbly written fanfiction I've ever read, and there were a lot of grammar issues and minor things with syntax in the beginning, it more than makes up for it with the quality of the second half and the emotional authenticity of the story.
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